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[Naruto on a bad day]

lol

Do you really think this is good? Not only did you trace/copy from an already existing picture which happens to be your profile pic. You still did it poorly. I have to say from observing, everyone I have seen who likes the show, Naruto is ugly as fuck and a complete loser. I'm not saying that but instead I am observing it.

Treviabot92-Virstein responds:

I never said it was good. Frankly, I could care less what YOU think, I drew it and I got an A. That's all that matters. And also, it wasn't exactly tracing; you can't easily see through that paper. I merely drew what I saw.

Oh, and if you REALLY want to see "ugly as ****", then watch some OLD anime, like Great Teacher Onizuka. The face faults look like hell.

[The Shadow Blog]

its good

I like the colors and the artwork of this piece but there are very small imperfections. Beginning with his hands. The left hand isn't a big deal since it is concealed but the right one looks terrible.I think you should have removed it completely and covered it somehow or had his hand in a complete fist, covering up the fingers. I think the smoke could have been a little better and less dense. It seems to completely take away from the character itself. Lastly, his bicep looks ridiculous. It looks as if you placed a large pack of smokes or a square on his upper arm instead of a muscle. To fix that I think you should get rid of the hard lines and dark shading around it, especially near the top.

After all this issues though, this piece is very cool and I love the comic book style.

One last note, I can accept that his leg disappears behind him because of the perspective but his left shoulder looks too bulky and unnecessary after further inspection. I think you should have just left the shoulder plate on the left arm to match the right one. Great job though, keep it up.

XavierH responds:

Thanks for this. I'm still very new with using a tablet and learning comic style so the nitpicking does help me very much.